Following this blog’s tradition, this is this year’s Halloween story. Enjoy!
Never Better
βHey, Pat.β
The sun in my eyes blinds me as I squint to see Anne approach. βHey.β
She throws her bag onto the grass and sits down beside me with a little hop. βSo, are you going to Sarahβs Halloween party?β
I let out a growl and roll my eyes to remind Anne how I feel about my nemesis. βSure.β
βWhat are you dressing up as? Iβll dress up as Vampirela,β she continues at her usual machinegun speed before I can answer. She claws her fingers to strike a threatening pose. βArgh!β
I chuckle, her silly mirth contagious. βI havenβt picked up anything yet.β
βWell, youβd better hurry. Only three days left till Saturday. Why donβt youββ A bellβs shrill ring interrupts her. βOops, gotta fly. Donβt wanna be late for math. Later!β
She flies off as I stagger to my feet and hoist my bag around my shoulder. I donβt care about being late, especially for math. Donβt care about school, donβt care about Sarahβs stupid party, either. She only invited me out of pity. Or to spite me. Everyone knows I have a monster crush on her boyfriend. Now that she and Jason are together, she wastes no opportunity to rub it in my face. Nah, this is one party I donβt care if I miss.
And let her know she got under your skin? a voice inside my head asks.
I recognize it immediately; itβs the voice of my prickled ego. What do I care what she thinks? Sheβs a cow.
And the rest of the class? You want everyone to know she beat you at your own game?
Screw them all. Theyβre a bunch of morons.
Whatever, the voice says. I can hear in its tone it knows the truth: itβs already won the argument. Iβm going to the stupid party.
Saturday morning, Iβm walking down to the mall. I still havenβt figured out what to wear. Just before leaving, my overbearing stepmother suggested I dress up as a ghost. She scrunched her perfect nose when I explained it made me look like an oversized tampon. She still had that disapproving look when I stormed out of the house.
Ooh, maybe you can dress up as one of the models from your brotherβs magazines. You know, the ones he hides under his bed.
The thought of me in knee-high leather boots fails to impress me, although a riding crop might be useful for when I meet Sarah. I break into a naughty giggle. As I reject the silly thought, I glance at a store window. When did this shop open?
I step back and take in the rundown building. My brow furrows. Wasnβt this a coffee shop? Halloween masks, costumes, and antiques beckon me from inside the store. Without much thought, I push the door open and cross the threshold.
βWelcome to my shop, young lady,β an ancient voice wheezes. βThe place where your dreams come true.β
I swirl around to find the storekeeper staring at me, rubbing his hands like a fly that has just spotted a particularly juicy insect. He looks like he just came from an audition for the lead part in Return of the Mummy. I stifle a sneeze. He smells like a mummy, too. In fact, the whole place stinks of ancient mold and dust.
I force a smile on my face. βJust browsing, thank you.β I sidestep him, taking care not to accidentally touch him, and run my fingers through gossamer fabrics so old they look like they might come apart in my hand.
I am about to leave when an African mask catches my eye. It is the ugliest thing Iβve ever seen; an elongated black oval face with puffy, slit eyes. Brown leather covers the nose and eyes. Thin knotted strips drape it, starting from right under the ears and continuing all the way down to the chin. It looks like itβs made of leather and wood. I cringe away. The thing gives me the creeps.
Which makes it perfect for Halloween.
I scrape away my disgust and pick it up. Surprisingly, no dust covers it, unlike pretty much everything else in the store. I turn it around to have a look at the interior. It is soft and surprisingly supple under my fingers. βHow much for this?β
The storekeeper yanks it away. βThatβs not for sale, young lady.β He places it behind the counter. βMasks are not to be put on lightly. Especially this one.β He lifts bloodshot eyes at me. βNow, can I interest you in something else? A zombie costume, perhaps?β
I almost shout at him that I want the mask, but something tells me he wonβt budge. At the corner of the shop I spot a couple of dust-covered vampire suits, more gray than black, but pretend not to have noticed them. βSure,β I say and wear my sweetest smile. βBut do you have any vampire costumes instead?β
His face beams. βOf course.β He emerges from behind the counter to make his arthritic way to the tacky suits.
As soon as he turns his back to me, I snatch the mask and shove it into my bag, throwing a crumbled twenty on the counter. βOn second thought, never mind. I gotta run.β I rush out Β the door as he is standing in the middle of the shop with a confused look on his wrinkly face. βBye,β I cry out and step out into the street.
I canβt believe I just did that! The rush overwhelms me. I break into uncontrollable giggles as I hurry down the street. As soon as I turn a corner, I stop and lean against the wall to catch my breath. I open my bag. The mask is even uglier in the daylight. Good. Perhaps itβll scare Sarah.
I hop back to the house, my mission for the day complete.
Anne tugs at my arm. βCome on, show me your mask already, will you?β
βJust gimme a sec.β I fish it out from my bag with a dramatic flourish of my hand, savoring her gasp.
βThatβs soβ¦ ugly,β she squeals and claps her hands. βItβs perfect! Where did you get it?β
βA new place on High Street. Where a coffee shop used to be?β Her frown reveals she doesnβt know what Iβm talking about. βNever mind,β I say with a shrug. βWhatβs important is, itβs mine.β
βItβs so gonna freak everyone out,β she says, her eyes bright with anticipation. Her gaze travels down to her Vampirela costume and a look of disappointment washes over her face.
She pats down the flimsy fabric. If it was meant to be sexy, sheβs definitely overpaid: it looks like an ordinary red T-shirt, only with a smudge supposed to be bloodied vampire teeth stamped on. I pity her for a moment, but my excitement over my perfect mask soon puts that to rest.
I turn the mask around and push it against my face. It feels warmer than I expected and pulses for a moment as if alive. It clings to my face like a second skin. I almost tear it off in shock, then shake my head, surprised by how natural it feels. βThis is so cool,β I tell Anne, enjoying her envious look. βI can almost forget itβs there.β
βLetβs go inside already,β she snaps at me and pulls me away from the driveway and toward Sarahβs house. Loud music booms rhythmically, shaking the pavement in a furious beat reminiscent of African drums.
You must feel right at home, I tell the mask and I giggle as I cross the door into the house. A wave of euphoria hits me. Even seeing Sarah dressed like a slutty nurse and Jason as a very handsome sailor fails to jar me. Wait, are they arguing?
My heart skips a beat. I start a beeline toward themβvery casually, of courseβbut Anne pulls me to the dance floor. βI wouldnβt know who you are if it wasnβt for your hair,β she shouts to be heard over the thundering beat.
I run my fingers through my curls and shake them loose, letting them drape over my shoulders. My blond hair is my signature; I want everyone to know who the girl with the coolest mask in the room is. I follow her to the dance floor and start dancing like Iβve never danced before.
Out of the corner of my eye, I catch Jason gawking at me. I put some extra sway in my hips, and his gaze travels down my body, catching at my twirling pelvis. Sarah turns her head to follow his eyes. Her face turns all crimson and she starts yelling at him. I canβt hear what sheβs saying, but he throws his hands in the air in an exasperated way and storms out of the house.
I push away writhing bodies and rush behind him, catching up with him in the garden. The fresh air feels cool after the dance floorβs heat. He turns to face me, the fury in his eyes softening as soon as he recognizes me. βJeez, Pat,β he says. βI almost didnβt know you with that mask.β His fingers trace the maskβs leather. βWhere on earth did you come up with that thing?β
I laugh a warm laugh that starts at my belly and brings heat to my face. βDoes it matter?β
He leans toward me and takes my hand. My breath catches as his lips brush against my ear. βNot at all,β he whispers. βBut how could I kiss you if I wanted to?β
A feverish shiver tickles my spine. I place one finger under my chin to remove the mask, then realize my face will probably be a sweaty mess from all the dancing. βIβll be back in a flash,β I say in a choking voice.
His eyes sparkle with promise. βHurry up.β
I tremble as I find my way back into the house. Sarahβs crying in a corner, two of her best friends consoling her. She glares at me, her eyes shooting poison darts as I head into the bathroom. I ignore her and shut the door behind me, then drop my bag on the sink top and fish out my lipstick and makeup. I almost scare myself as I glance at the image in the mirror, the mask contorted in a terrible grimace.
I place my thumbs under my chin and push the leather away. It refuses to budge. I use more force until my skin feels like it is coming apart. With a satisfying sllllurp-plop, I finally pry the mask off. I let it drop into the sink, then grab the makeup.
The mask stares back at me from the mirror.
My fingers touch my face. Instead of my skin, they graze the maskβs leather. Behind the narrow slits, my eyebrows meet in a confused frown. My gaze travels downward, where the mask in the sink is still grimacing at me.
A second layer must have been glued underneath, I realize. Drowning a sigh, I use the base of my palm to pry it off my face. I push it away as my thoughts drift to Jason and what I will be doing to him in a short while. Sllllurp-plop. The second layer crashes against the mirror and lands atop the first one. There.
The mask is still staring back at me from the mirror.
My mind freezes.
Furious fingers scratch my face, leaving traces on the maskβs leather.
I howl in rage.
Just come off, you stupid thing! Jasonβs waiting!
I push it away with all my force. Sllllurp-plop.
The mask is staring back at me from the mirror.
Sllllurp-plop.
Sllllurp-plop.
Sllllurp-plop.
Soon, the bathroom is filled with masks. They all seem to be laughing at me.
I scream and yank the door open. I crash into Anne.
βHey, is everything all right?β she asks as she tries to sneak a look inside the bathroom.
I shove her away and rush downstairs, ignoring the stunned looks.
Jason is still waiting for me. He rushes to me as I storm outside. βHey, Pat, isββ
βShut up,β I cry out and run to my car.
I slam the pedal and screech away toward downtown. I swerve to avoid running over a bunch of kids dressed up as ghouls and zombies. I need to find the shop and ask the old geezer what the hell is going on. He has to get this thing off my face.
Moments later, I reach the place. I slam the brakes and almost lose control of the car, narrowly avoiding crashing into an empty bus stop. Where the old manβs shop was, the familiar coffee shop now stands. Where is it?
I shut my eyes, count to ten, and open them again. The coffee shop is still sitting there, its neon welcome sign mocking me. I jump out of the car and yank the shopβs door open. A pimply guy is gawking at me. The place is almost empty, save for an old woman sipping her coffee.
βCool mask,β pimple-face says.
His eyes open wide as I grab his shirt and pull him to me. βWhereβs the old man?β I scream.
βWhat old man?β he stammers. βMr. Simmons,β he cries out, βthereβs someone for you.β
I let him go. He runs behind the counter and cowers as a middle-aged man comes through a door at the back. βIs everything all right here?β he asks in an authoritative voice.
βDoes it look like everythingβs all right?β I holler at him, pointing at my face. βWhereβs the ancient dude? Whatβd you do with him?β
βCalm down, young woman,β he says in a hushed voice and takes me by the arm, glancing at the customers. βYouβre making a scene.β
I jerk his hand away. βDo I look like I care?β
He grabs me again, more forcefully this time, and pulls me to a corner near the old woman, who seems to be enjoying the unexpected show. βLook, I canβt help you if I donβt understand what the problem is. Just take a breath, will you?β
I follow his advice and draw deep breaths. They do nothing to slow down my thumping heart. βThere was a shop here. Had old costumes and stuff.β
He points at the floor. βHere?β
I, too, point at the floor. βHere.β
His brow creases. βWhen?β
βThis morning. It was run by an ancient dude.β
βOoh, that sounds like Mr. Wilson,β the old woman chimes in. βHis shop used to be right here. He had the loveliest antiques, he did.β
βThat canβt be right,β Simmons says, shaking his head. βWeβve been around for over twenty years now, and I donβt remember any such place.β
The old womanβs chuckle reminds me of crackling paper. βThatβs because it closed when I was still this young womanβs age.β She lets out a sigh and leans back in her chair. βAh, that Mr. Wilson. He loved his Halloween pranks, he did. Always scared us little things silly. Would have loved your mask.β
βI donβt care about your trip down memory lane,β I snap at her. βWhere can I find him?β
She tilts her head the way dogs do when you blow one of those weird whistlesβthe ones no one else hears. βThe cemetery, Iβll bet. I told you, he was already an old man when I was your age.β
βYouβre lying,β I screech and push my hands against my ears. βYouβre all lying.β
I barrel out of the shop before anyone can stop me. Tears fly from my eyes, blinding me. I crash into a bike that sends me flying into the air. I thump my head on the coffee shopβs glass window and black out for a moment.
βAre you all right?β an anxious voice is asking over and over again, breaking through the fog in my head.
I moan to get its owner to stop asking me that darned question. I sit up with an old manβs groan. My whole left side is on fire. I rub it gently to get a feel of the damage. βWhat happened?β
βYou ran out of the coffee shop and into my bike.β
The rest of his words fade away along with my pain as I stare into the sweetest pair of brown eyes; eyes filled with worry. A gorgeous guy is hovering over me, his hands patting me down. Were it anyone else, Iβd jerk them away. In this case, I long to lose myself in his arms. My eyes trip up on the sharp angles of his face and scarlet heat warms my cheeks.
I toss my head and push a runaway lock of my hair behind my ear. My finger stumbles on the maskβs edge and a curse hisses past my lips.
βHere,β he says and reaches for the mask. βLet me help you.β
Icy panic claws at my heart. βNo,β I shriek. Before I can stop him, he pries away the awful thing from my face.
His eyes widen and a smile crawls up his lips. βNow, whatβs such a beautiful girl doing with such an ugly mask?β He tosses it to the pavement. βThere. You donβt need that.β He takes my hand and helps me to my feet.
My gaze travels from his handsome face to the horrible thing on the pavement and back. βItβsβ¦ off?β I stammer.
He frowns in the cutest way and places a warm palm over my brow as if checking my temperature. βAre you sure youβre all right?β
I cup his palm with trembling fingers. I swear that I feel a spark the moment I touch him. My lips part in a wide grin. βNever better.β





Oh Nicholas. Wow. Just wow. You should do a Halloween collection… and I am glad it had a happy ending. I worried for the poor girl so much, LOL π Well done, dear. I’ll have to start calling you the Terror Master or something like that π
Ha ha – not a genre I feel comfortable with, but thank you π
Well, that was fun. I didn’t expect the happy romantic ending and positive message. A nice alternative to the knife in the heart! <3
Lol – yes, this was an arrow through the heart. Valentines day meets Halloween kinda thing π
Ha ha Exactly!
Fabulous story, Nicholas. Glad the last mask came off. Guess she had to meet the right hands to help take it off. π Nothing wrong with a handsome stranger.
Indeed. The real meaning, of course, is that we can take off our masks when in the presence of someone who cares for us π
Excellent twist at the end. Why do those magical store owners keep cursed items out in the open? Then again, I’m not really sure it was cursed.
Just a prank played on her by a dead dude, I think.
Those dead dudes need to stay entertained somehow.
It’s not like they have anything else to do.
Great work, Nicholas. The happy ending caught me out nicely!
Best wishes, Pete.
Thanks! I was surprised by the romance angle when it came to me, so I figured it would appeal to others as well.
The deeper meaning of the story, of course, is that we can safely take away our masks when we’re loved by someone π
Great Halloween story, Nicholas – loved it. Happy Halloween π
Yay! Thank you so much, Catherine π
Yay! Super fun and never better! Happy Halloween all!
Thank you so much! As always, it owes much to your feedback π